A good melody tells a story – without the words.
Of course I’m not saying it tells a literal story. But a good melody often takes you on a condensed journey with a satisfying Act 1, Act, 2, and Act 3. Just like in a traditional movie or play, Act 1 presents the situation, Act 2 develops the conflict, usually reaching a climax at the end of the Act, and Act 3 restates the themes and all issues (harmonic and melodic, in this case) are usually resolved.
This is not the only way to put together a melody. In fact, the examples sited are pretty traditional and old-school. But they’re great illustrations of the idea that, to work, A Good Melody Tells A Story (and doesn’t just wait around for the words to do the storytelling).
I’ve found the simplest way to understand this idea is in your basic 8 bar melody, which often includes 4 phrases (2 bars each) –
1) Statement of the main theme (Act 1);
2) Restatement with slight variation (Act 2a);
3) Main Variation (Act 2b);
4) Restatement and/or Resolution of the main theme (Act 3).
Conceptually, pretty straightforward. Some examples (think about them without the words):
Yesterday (Paul McCartney) – Starts with a simple 3-note descending phrase. Next it rises up by scale tones to a higher statement of that phrase. Then descends by scale tones to a lower restatement. Then a final phrase that resolves with three notes going in the other direction (down-up-up).
Reason To Believe (Tim Hardin) – First phrase: statement of theme. Second: slight variation. Third: A longer, passionate phrase that leads to the highest point (both melodically and emotionally). Fourth: resigned resolution.
Allentown (Billy Joel) – Tremendous soaring melody. The first two phrase are structurally very similar to those in Yesterday. But the third phrase is double the usual length, allowing it to either loop around – back to another verse – or add a 2 bar phrase (bars 9 & 10) that restates the first phrase (and the title).
Smoke On The Water (Deep Purple) – not the vocal melody; the guitar riff! Think about it… Statement – slight variation – restatement – resolution. All with 4 notes.
There are thousands of other examples of all different styles and genres. I’m not recommending that your melody follow the patterns above. I am suggesting that thinking about melodies as having a drama of their own can help yours stand out.
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I really appreciate this insight. Are there certain notes or chords that are specific for “mood or feeling” transitions?
Joyce,
Just saw this, sorry!
My answer is: Not that I know of.
Best wishes,
Tony