Comments on: Details and Trade-Offs https://tonyconniff.com/details-and-trade-offs/ Songwriter, Producer, and Coach, based in New York City. Fri, 01 Jul 2022 19:04:31 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.4 By: TonyConniff https://tonyconniff.com/details-and-trade-offs/#comment-13722 Fri, 01 Jul 2022 19:04:31 +0000 https://tonyconniff.com/?p=6720#comment-13722 In reply to michael marshall.

Thanks, Michael! I’ll try it.

]]> By: TonyConniff https://tonyconniff.com/details-and-trade-offs/#comment-13721 Fri, 01 Jul 2022 19:04:02 +0000 https://tonyconniff.com/?p=6720#comment-13721 In reply to Peter Leslie.

Pete,
I appreciate your thoughtful comments, and your being a steady reader.
I’ll definitely explore your suggestions the next time I sit down with the song (soon).
Thank you!
Tony

]]> By: michael marshall https://tonyconniff.com/details-and-trade-offs/#comment-13623 Fri, 24 Jun 2022 20:16:19 +0000 https://tonyconniff.com/?p=6720#comment-13623 what a pan to fry your brain in
somethings defy containment
everything here is entertainment
that much is clear – in America

]]> By: Peter Leslie https://tonyconniff.com/details-and-trade-offs/#comment-13622 Fri, 24 Jun 2022 15:55:06 +0000 https://tonyconniff.com/?p=6720#comment-13622 Hi Tony,
Thanks for sharing some of your conundrum wrestles! Good decisions I feel, I definitely agree with ‘entertainment’ as the stronger option.
With the feel/fear line, it struck me that a reassuring line like ‘no my dear it’s not our fate’ may work?’ Of course, having not heard the song, it may be a crap suggestion, and ‘no my dear’ feels clumsy and may completely suck with your melody and rhythm structure, but half-baked ideas can sometimes lead to someone else polishing them into good ones.
Thanks again, I always enjoy your posts and they’re definitely helpful.

Cheers
Pete

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