When writing a Verse/Chorus song, say I’ve got the Title and Chorus. When it comes to writing the Verses, it’s easy to encounter ‘facing-the-blank-page syndrome’… Where to start; then where to go? How to explore the idea and fill out the Verses? What would be effective and truthful?
To me, the first answer here (and the first mistake I make is ignoring it) is to look to the Title/Chorus itself as a North Star to guide me. Structurally, the Verses’ primary function is to set up that Title and Chorus.
So… what’s the most effective/powerful/interesting/resonant/unusual (you pick) way I can get to that destination?
Keeping the Title and Chorus in mind often gets me or keeps me on track. It’s amazing how easily a song can just ‘wander off’… into general emotions and predictable images that relate to the Title in a vague way… but don’t really set it up in a committed manner.
I have to remember that this is this song, specifically. It’s not just a grab bag for anything seemingly related that crosses my mind. I have to make decisions, sometimes not obvious ones, about what this particular song is and isn’t. And the Title/Chorus is usually the embodiment, the fulcrum, of the main idea of the song. Everything in the song needs to point towards it or reflect it n some way.
Narrowing my focus, using the Title and making the What To Leave In/What To Take Out decisions described above, makes it easier to complete the song. That can feel counter-intuitive (aren’t more choices better?), but I find it’s usually true. Knowing what a song isn’t about and what doesn’t belong in it is often as important as knowing what it is about.
Highly specific detail, surprising characters and stories, action-filled verbs, visual and tactile images (helping the listener see and feel)… All of these are essential parts of building the situation or story. But they don’t answer the question: What is the situation or story?
That’s where turning to the Title can be so useful. Let it lead your imagination to the rest of the lyric.