I post songwriting-related quotes on Facebook regularly; not always because I agree with them but because I think they say something worth considering. I recently posted a quote from Taylor Swift, which I put up because I thought she expressed a pretty good songwriting approach: “Think, ‘What would I say to him right now if I could and if I had the nerve to?’ And then you think of some rhymes and you put it all together.”
Along with (predictable) comments from people who don’t think anyone born after 1975 could know anything about songwriting, I got a response from Clay Mills II, hit songwriter and founder of SongTown.com, who wrote: “Absolutely a great way to start. In my critiquing of thousands of songs I’ve discovered, too many people just start writing and don’t first think about what they want to say and who they want to say it to.”
So this brings up two good ideas. One is that you can write a song directly to (or at) someone specific for whom you have powerful feelings, at the time when you’re having those feelings (or even later).
This is actually an exercise I’ve been using for years in Beginning Songwriting classes – write a letter to someone directly expressing your feelings about them to them. And often the follow-up is to write a song based on that letter. Some people even use their letter to write a song whether there’s a follow-up assignment or not!
The other idea, the one that Clay brought up, is not just useful but important – in most songs it’s indispensable to have a clear idea of what you’re trying to say.
It seems so obvious as to not be worth mentioning, but trust me, it has laid low many a potentially good song.
Some writers won’t even start without knowing what the song’s ‘about’. This makes a lot of sense and probably saves a lot of time. Occasionally I’m in that category – I begin knowing basically what I want to say. But, for better or worse, much of the time I’m not one of those writers.
I wander, I try things, I search for words and music that combine in a potent way. But I am always looking for what the song’s ’about’. And if I don’t find (or start with) something good, I end up with a weak song. Having a strong and clear main idea, whether you begin with it or just end up with it, is so important in any kind of writing.
In most songs, I think this is primarily about the Chorus idea, and then about clearly supporting it – in some way; there are always many – in the Verses (and Bridge, if there is one). But what a song is ‘about’ also relates to what you might call its theme, which isn’t always overtly stated in the Chorus.
For example. in The Beatles’ song ‘All You Need Is Love’ the theme is clearly expressed in the Title. But in their ‘Penny Lane’, the lyric involves pictures of a specific place and time… but the theme could be said to be the vivid Power of Memory. And though the lyric stays specific, it’s also always supporting that theme.
Sometimes songs just come out in a rush. But at some point it’s worth considering what the song’s about – and then to use those thoughts to make the song more focused – and better.
(By the way, though I’ve mostly focused on the lyric, the music is, as always in songwriting, crucial and integral. The feeling and tone of the music must complement the lyric in some way, and vice versa, even if by contrast. The music will always determine how the lyric will come across; how the listener will, in the words of Yip Harburg, ‘feel the thought’.)
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Hi Tony:
Definitely a thought-provoking article. But I keep trying to reconcile it with my feeling that some of the most evocative songs have enough ambiguity in them to give the listener a canvas onto which he/she can project their own personal meanings.
Maybe it’s important to know what you are writing about, but also to control exactly what, and how much of that is revealed in the lyric.
Another possible technique is to be in a peak emotional state, write whatever, and later come back and think about how what you wrote relates to what you were experiencing. It usually does but sometimes in abstract and interesting ways.
I just finished writing and recording a set of 12 songs from scratch – a harrowing, but ultimately rewarding experience. Some of the techniques I used:
Take a song that you like and write a response to it: I used a very popular song where the protagonist is valiantly trying to contact and make peace with an ex-lover, but is getting no response. So I wrote from the perspective of the ex-lover, and imagined that the peacemaking attempts were perceived as stalking, or at best too little, too late.
Find an interesting quotation and build on it: I happened to notice someone’s tattoo on a train. The tattoo was an interesting slogan. So I just started there – paraphrased it and built out into a gently inspirational song.
Free associate while in an emotional state and re-examine later: I noticed that two songs on the album ended up using similar images of floating away into the sky. I knew initially that floating away symbolized the end of a relationship. But when I circled back, it was clear that it had a double meaning and also symbolized death.
I guess I’m saying that songs with a clear story and meaning are great, but that’s not the only way for songs to be, and that the meaning may be clear to the writer, but there can be an art to how much is revealed.
Great ideas, Jon. In my own defense, I did say ‘Usually’ in the title, and there are many qualifiers throughout the post. There’s no one type of good song, or one way (or any proven way, for that matter!) to write one.
This definitely applies: https://tonyconniff.com/songs-like-art-can-range-from-realism-to-abstraction/
Best wishes,
Tony
Oh, nothing to defend, and you did say ‘usually”! Doing these production albums where I have to write 12 songs at a clip in specific genres has forced me to try all kinds of different ways to get something written. I thought borrowing some random person’s tattoo was pretty good – but also a sign of the desperation that tends to occur towards the end of these projects!
Cheers,
Jon
I once was in a group of 5 people who had to write 156 songs in something like 6 weeks… so I feel your pain. Remind me to tell you about it sometime…
Thanks,
TC
Somtimes the tune comes first, but you always have to have a theme for the song for it to make sense even if its only for your self to make sense of it, brilliant article by the way tony
Thank you, Aldan!
Best wishes,
Tony
Often I know what I want to say but no one seems to understand…..
Yes… then there’s that!
Thanks,
Tony